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Years have passed since the fall of the dark lord. Peace has finally been achieved..or has it? Deatheaters arise again. Who's the leader this time? Who's the Saviour? Find out on Hogwarts: Golden Age
 
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PostSubject: Connor Davis    Connor Davis  EmptyWed Aug 26, 2015 8:32 pm

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Full Name: Connor Davis
Gender: Male
Birthday: October 31, 1991
Age: 25
Blood: Pureblood
Birth Place: Ireland
Nationality: Irish
Current Residence: London

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Family: Conors parents are still alive. They are Maria and Xavier Davis. He has 2 younger twin sisters, Sarah and Sasha. His best friend is his cousin Max.  He and Max do everything together and he is extremely protective of Sarah and Sasha. His little sister, Sarah, is currently 4 months pregnant by a dooche bag who left her, so Connor is currently helping Sarah with her pregnancy. She is expecting a little girl who will be named Melanie.

History: Connor was an ambitious child with an energetic mindset and a child like soul. However, as he matured, he grew up to be more responsible and careful in life. He tends to be a bit childish at times however but can quickly regain his composure if he needs to. He was bullied alot growing up for his accent and didnt have many friends outside of his family. He spent most of his time with his sisters and cousin in their family cottage on the beach. However, he often seperated to explore the land his family owned. He got good grades all through out Hogwarts and graduated with top scores. He became a teacher a few years after graduating after traveling the world with his cousin. He was always fascinated by the muggle worl and all the thing that they could do without magic, so he traveled the muggle worlds and got the credenitials he needed to become the muggle stuies professor for Hogwarts

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Appearance: Black hair, blue eyes, chiseled jaw,

Personality: Connor is an outgoing individual with a childlike heart and soul. However, he is very mature and responsible when he needs to be. He is fascinated by the muggle world and hopes to one day reside in it. He is a very protective man when it comes to his friends, family and loved ones.


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PostSubject: Re: Connor Davis    Connor Davis  EmptyThu Aug 27, 2015 6:25 am

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There is an application template, please follow it. You have ignored several things

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PostSubject: Re: Connor Davis    Connor Davis  EmptyThu Aug 27, 2015 12:29 pm

I've been told my rejection needed more explaining. There is no detail, on anything, it looks like you copied and pasted it from a nursery's character creation page. There needs to be more detail and volume on the profile. Elaborate about family relations, elaborate about personality and looks. Don't just write a bunch of random descriptive words and expect us to just accept it.
It even asks for detail in the application. Clearly you couldn't be bothered to do one properly, I can show you an example of a application we'd like to see if that helps. Until it's done properly, this application will remain rejected.
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PostSubject: Re: Connor Davis    Connor Davis  EmptyThu Aug 27, 2015 2:18 pm

I dont really understand, I had been accepted and colored before, so I dont see why Im not anymore. Obviously, someone didnt have an issue with my application
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PostSubject: Re: Connor Davis    Connor Davis  EmptyThu Aug 27, 2015 2:32 pm

Actually, your character application was not accepted, your job application was. You will need to add more detail to this before it will be accepted. Feel free to PM me if you need any help.

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PostSubject: Re: Connor Davis    Connor Davis  EmptyThu Aug 27, 2015 3:49 pm

I lengthened it
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PostSubject: Re: Connor Davis    Connor Davis  EmptyThu Aug 27, 2015 4:24 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Connor Davis    Connor Davis  EmptyThu Aug 27, 2015 5:15 pm

Actually, you were sorted because someone, who I won't mention didn't realise you hadn't been approved. it was until Tess pointed out the application that I took a closer look. We don't reject applications for fun you know
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PostSubject: Re: Connor Davis    Connor Davis  EmptyFri Aug 28, 2015 12:11 pm

I never said you did. I just hadnt realized it hadnt been accepted
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